And the floor boards started creaking.
And I heard ghosty noises. Hooooooooo
I’m coming to haunt you stay away I yelled.
I went back to bed terrified. Suddenly I
Heard something making weird noises
Under my bed and it was the boogeyman
Ahhhh I cried. I went running over to
Mums and dads room. Mum dad I saw
A ghost that’s no since exclaimed dad.
Come on I will come and tuck you in
No the ghost will haunt you.
You must of seeing things
5 or ten minuets later he fell asleep.
I love the way you have used the words "cried" and "exclaimed" instead of "said". You have done exactly what we have been learning to do in class. Keep it up Campbell. Mrs K
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